In my opinion I think that Mikheil's speech was the most attractive because firstly he didn't look at his notes even a single time and he was extremely prepared for it and the reasons he fought for having the uniform was very good and convincing.
What about the speech made it persuasive?
Inspiring delivery? Relevant topic? Strong Rhetoric?
I think that the most persuasive thing about his speech was that it was always on topic and never went off topic with giving irrelevant information. Another reason why it was good, was the rhetorical usage and the usage of funny metaphors. By using funny metaphors it gained the attention of many people, even those who weren't paying attention. Also what made all these things flow together was that he had his whole speech memorized therefore he didn't have to stop every 20 seconds and read from his paper.
What do you think you did well in your speech?
I think that my tone was pretty good overall the speech, specially when i used the metaphor "One night of pleasure is not worth a life time regret" because if i didn't emphasize on that people wouldn't remember it as good as they do now. I also think that I used a wide range of statistics which made my speech stronger from the base and all the information that I mentioned during my speech was relevant.
What do you think you could have done better?
There are a couple of things that I would want to do better on for my next persuasive speech. One would be to have a bit more eye contact and to give the speech slower. I would say eye contact because throughout my speech even-though i had eye contact with the audience i think it just wasn't enough so next time i would want to have more eye contact with the audience. Also i would like to slow down a but while saying y speech because it really affected my time management but due to being a bit nervous gave my speech a bit too fast. Overall those are the main two points I would work on for next time that i will be giving a persuasive speech.
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